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PostSubject: Vessalius 101   Sat Apr 18, 2015 2:48 am

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Silence of the Rain

We knew that if we let someone else take Tim’s car, it would probably be trashed, or sold, turned into something completely new. We didn’t want that to happen.

Tim was on a vacation trip to see his family a few states over. His brother came back from the war and they were having this great big welcome-home party for him.

Tim took a plane.
He shouldn’t have been on that plane. It was only a half hour from landing when a turbulence ruined the flight and the plane came crashing down, killing every passenger and employee.

I must admit, at the time that Tim was around smiling and making my day, I fell in love. I loved the way his eyes lit up whenever he saw me, or my son. I loved the way Tim’s voice curved at the end from his slight southern accent. He got along with my son so well. Tim came over almost every day, taught my son how to throw a baseball, wash the car, mow the lawn. I fell in love with Tim.

I visit his grave every year.

My son is fourteen now. He remembers small things about Tim, but he doesn’t remember much else. He sometimes asks if Tim was is his father, and I laugh and shake my head.

Tomorrow is the anniversary of Tim’s death. It’s like the whole world is mourning for him, and I stare out the window of my room, watching the rain pour down and splash off his car. I end up staring for a long time, remembering the time before Tim left to visit his family.

Tim and I hooked up.

I remember the way his lips warmed mine, his hands caused me to shiver as he touched my skin. I remember the way his voice would grow hoarse when he whispered my name, the way his hand curved when he brushed my hair back. Our hands fit perfectly, and I was scared to ever fall in love again.

I open my eyes and realize the rain has stopped. It’s so dark outside except for the single street light over Tim’s car. I get dressed, grab the keys to his car, and go outside.

I stand in front of the car for what feels like hours, when it was only a handful of seconds.

I take a deep breath and step forward, unlocking the door, and I slide into the front seat. It still smells like Tim.

I take another deep breath and turn her on, listening and feeling her growl to life, breaking the silence of the darkness of night.
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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sat Apr 18, 2015 7:24 am

you art is so great!!
and that story's good too c:

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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:20 am

ahhh thank you so much! =) it means a lot, especially with my writing
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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sat Apr 18, 2015 10:20 am

Woah, you're really talented. :0 Love the use of metaphors in your writing!

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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sat Apr 18, 2015 10:41 am

Oxymoron wrote:
Woah, you're really talented. :0 Love the use of metaphors in your writing!

My exact thoughts!
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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:39 pm

oh my wow you have some great talent.
I love writing literature, so it's fantastic that you do too!
I'd love to swap some with you sometime.

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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sat Apr 18, 2015 3:30 pm

thank you guys so much for the writing comments! ^___^
i'm doing a creative writing major through Full Sail University's online system and i miss writing, honestly

@holy; how does a swap work? that sounds like fun :0
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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sun Apr 19, 2015 1:57 am

well, it's very simple actually.
we can just swap literature. B)
like you can write me/link me a piece of yours, and I can do the same to you.
and then we can both give some criticism if we'd like.

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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sun Apr 19, 2015 2:01 am

Ooh, I see. I'll keep that in mind for future stuff!
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PostSubject: Re: Vessalius 101   Sun Apr 19, 2015 2:01 am

alright!

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